Just read the Art of Astonishment ( selected parts only, the book is too thick) and one caught my eye, its a tricked called Illusion.
I thought it was quite a good trick..thus I experimented with it and came up with my own plot.
B)
Sorry for the bad angle ( yes...its VERY bad) I cant quite position my phone.
And yes, that is ME speaking. <_< I sound bad.
Well, hope to hear your constructive ( or not!) criticism!