Hey guys, this is my 1st clip for the magic circle, hope you enjoy it ^^
Maxitwist - Amoni performance

!!! I don't do cards, but I LIKE! :D cheers!

Just my 2 cents worth.

Actually I got lost when I watching the clip. So I hope my comments won't turn you off.

First of all, Black card with black table, cannot see a thing, I only saw white lines and only the red is obvious. So personally, I don't think its visual to have black on black, just kill the effect.

Second, the 4 Aces packet, it is just weird, if you are only using the 4 cards to do the effect, you shouldn't have drop each card onto the table from the deck, pick up the cards again back to the deck, and then take out the 4 cards again.

The extra move that you did to go back to the deck becomes suspicious as to, "why you need to show us the aces again on the deck when you just shown it on the table"

In order to justify the 4 cards turning down and using the 4 cards, you shouldn't have drop it on the table in the first place.

Third is the turnover of each card in the packet. First phase, you have ace of spade on top and you turn over the bottom card to be diamond ace. Maybe you initiate to be turning over the rest of the aces but my first impression is you are only turning the bottom card face up. So your first 2 turnover won't make sense to me because my first impression is there are already 2 cards face down and why are you showing me that?

Fourth, the last twist is impressive, turning the 4 cards to be suits are a neat ending, but to me, not that powerful enough, if I have a choice, I will turn all 4 cards to be blank cards which is worth, and you turn back to the deck, take the deck, spread open showing its all blank. Then I personally think it kills. The reason because doing that give you a purpose of having a deck there. Because it create an additional distraction to the people if your deck is there, as they will suspect you do something on the pack to the deck, then as you conclude and end only on the 4 cards, they will react and think, "Ah the deck not used? then bring out the deck for what?"

My thoughts are, alot of times, people won't react and think immediately, but as they sit back and think, they will start to form clues and information from your actions and predict how it was done. Even though its not a critical thing, but it will make a different if you are doing it alot of times.

Even though the end phase will become very obvious after you done a few times, but people will be intreat when they saw others react on how they react last time.

May I know what deck is that?