heres my own video, seng hoe and wei dong might be releasing theirs soon, but heres mine for now. hope ur like it. pls give constructive comments and feedbacks about it. thanks.

http://s1.youshareit.com/files/efde42022d1...eae75c118e.html


credit: Dan and Dave Buck
Ashford Kneitel.

Woah!

Carsons Nuggets in action, sure it is kickass!

Loads of Bucks stuff in there, great! ^_^

oh s**t sry Senghoe forgot to credit u for editing it for me. yea, seng hoe edited the video for me thanks to him. :)

Oops...... Okay Carsons.

Wow u did it in your uniform? :o Wait till your dicapline master come for you.. :P :P

Anyway,the vid was cool

Daren. Good job on ur flourish *clap clap clap*

Cool man ~ Nice one man ~

Cool Buck stuff.. The moves look clean and sweet (to me). :g:

very nice...damn...wish i could do that too.

thats some sick moves >.< god bless u man

ok. now for a REVIEW. :mellow:

firstly, good job on the editing. I can see you're trying to include a wide range of transitional effects between the cuts, and that's great. those people who wonder WHY I'm weird enough to actually go into these sort of details.. try editing you're own video, and you'll know how videos stand out thanks to their editing, and not the moves themselves.

pacing was well done, especially the opening sequence (a bit grainy though). went well with the music, and weird times when your hands were stationary before and after cuts were minimal.

so that part was more of Senghoe's effort I guess. but the cuts were somehow or another coordinated with the beat, and that's pretty good.

as for the cuts, they were well executed. I like videos that cover several angles. just that from some angles, it's really hard to appreciate the cut, as your school uniform kinda takes the foreground.. that is, the scenes in which your school name and name tag are visible. btw, those Carson City Nuggets look pretty cool ;)

everything looked pretty tight. smooth, and sorta reminds me of someone. :D

the video had a somewhat abrupt ending, as there isn't really a flow from cuts to ending. perhaps you could end with some really nice display or just something other than cuts. that would be a good way to end it.

why didn't you include credits in the video itself? although thinking about it, it wouldn't really fit well with the rest of the video. you might want to think about having them in the video itself next time.

and until then, keep working on everything! I see lots of potential in the 3 of you.

Wow Your Rev E looks so smooth and cool. wish i could do that too :huh:

Smooth.

hey Daren,
that's some cool moves u did there mate. furthermore they aint easy moves. wow..... i admire ya skills. wish i can do them as well as u do. great job dude!

MagicB

hey Daren well done.. I really enjoyed kryptonite and Rev E.. cant do them for nuts.. anyway maybe i found teh ending a bit too sudden... like suddenly end.. but over all i love the moves.. keep up the good shit guys

Don't know somehow I can't view the video it led me to "Download Error" ... Since this video is pinned it must be real hot !

:!!:

Can someone host it please?

sorry the link expired. i'll get a new link up by today u jus gotta wuat a while. :)

EDIT- damn ! soemting wrong, cant do much. sorry no longer is tis vid gonna be up, if u want to get it, add me at x3viLSaiNtx@hotmail.com. i'll send u the vid.