yep my first time. pls give ur comments.. constructive ones please. =)

oh ya.. CRANK up ur speakers

moves from: Kevin, Devo, Brian Tudor, Buck Twins, Jerry, siyang
special thanks to Kevin. =)

link1
http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0NEM63J...EZ2PPX5V8ER4662
link2
http://x302.putfile.com/videos/18709095067.wmv
link3
http://www.putfile.com/media.php?n=projNEO

and diff between the 2 link?

same.. first link has an expire date but u can dl
which second link has to viewed online

I thnk im the first to watch. Downlaoded it like 1 min afte ru posted. Im so cool. stil downlaoding 80 percent now.



DONE. Hang on.




Alright.

A few things.

1) TOO MANY MOVES AT THE SAME TIME. All i heard was a few swishes.

2) Ur birdy fan. The FAN that is, it can be MCUH better.

3) Your lighting on the first cobra....

4) Mary Jane was choppy but good for a first try! Just try not to pause so m uch when u thumb cut or cardini can't really see.

Thats all.

Peace.

hmm... this is my personal opinion.
the video is short but the graphic is good and nice.
first part is dark a bit.
overall- 8/10

good for a first vid

but i feel that there are too many moves at the same time...

and yea you need to work on the fan when u do a birdyfan...

and one more thing...the vid was a lil too dark n i really couldn't see much :(

ok, hmm let me think for awhile.

Your flourishes are good, no doubt about it. But, your video editing actually lowers the quality of your skill. Flourishing is extremely difficult to follow so if you do multiple flourishes at the same time, its impossible to watch. However, I think this was a great attempt so, cheers!

* Thunderous applause from me *

See ya bro.

Nick.

it lowers my skill of flourshing? ok tats sumthin to think abt.. hmm



to the rest: thanks for the comments peeps. i'll keep them in mind fer my next vid.. =)

hee hee sorry siyang. No offense eh? Anyway, seriously man, your video should show flourishes one by one. At most, show the same flourish from different angles at the same time. I really like your flourishing man but the video made me slightly confused. Too much showcased in such a short time.

Nick

the movie trailer background sound is a pretty hot thing now eh? especially for such a recent movie. lets see. the editing is pretty good, just that lighting and all that wasn't too good. and the video quality is too low to allow me to appreciate all your moves that well.

editing aside, there is simply too much going at the same time. but that's what the rewind button is for :lol:

umm. the Molecule 2 tapping part looks different. so does the rev part of Rev E. FB vanish was very well done, smooth and slick. and of course, the S-Shot was good, but the angle would have been nicer straight on B) your Mary Jane flick was impressive too. Railslide was well done. but you should have highlighted your King Cobra or something.. -_-

anyway, for a first vid, this is pretty darn good. though I DO know that this isn't your best, keep working on it! and the vid quality too :!!:

alright. that's about it for now. btw, "no offense" is the single most commonly used Pink Elephant :)

You know what i said on MSN. ;)

Space out the moves. Don't have too much happening at the same time. Lesser moves doesn't mean bad moves. Maybe it was a case of good card manipulation at the wrong time...? :P

The King Cobra should have been set apart. The Mol2 and the MJ made that section real confusing.

But good moves you have there. FB Vanish is realistic too. Like a REAL vanish. ;)

And was that a 'Sybil Shot' at 0:43? I didn't notice the flying card/ packet till like, just only.. I thought that the spinning packet/ card was a seperate clip. :g:

Is it just me or am I going blind?

Too many things to see at a time not to mention I could barely see them.

Overall, the video is a little bit dark, make things diff to watch. Like what Senghoe and the rest said, too many moves at the same time. I would say you don't include King Cobra with other moves, i don't know to watch your King or other moves. Hahaha

But the moves are nice so i can't concentrate on which to watch, haha.

The birdy look abit "Left and Right" Hehehe :)

But anyway Good job.

*Peace*

Did I see a king cobra?

WOw everyone can do a king cobra nowadays huh. HAHA..

Yo Neo....

ya vid was quite nice man. even though yeah i agree that there was a lil too much flourish going on here and there at the same time and the darkness makes it a lil hard to watch lol... will be much better if u can lighten up the vid man. its just too dark.

Yeah the birdy fan can surely be improved.... i myself need to work on it... not easy to balance ya?

but the moves are quite good. and wow u can do King Cobra!!! sigh... i can never to that :(. i also like the 360 rail slide. Good stuff for a first vid. u got the skills so keep it up!

Cheers!
Brendan

BAD LIGHTING !!! u need better better better better lighting in where ever u filmed

:ph43r: :ph43r: :ph43r:

and like what everyone says, u shouldn t puit too many clips into one and show thema all at the saem time, confusing, laymen might find this very impressive, however, to flourishers, it would be difficult to appreciate ur moves that u're doing.
u can stil achhiecve the same effect by playing one clip first beofer the nex clip appears, did that make any sense ? nvm, jus wathc harwin's the way and u'll get what i mean.

overall not that bad for a first video.

ok general prob is the lighting.. followed by the confusion of tooo many moves.. i'll keep them in mind =)

i actualy filmed a whole lot of moves but i cant find enough space to put them in the vid. i guess i hafta save them fer my next video.. haha thanks fer comments peeps.


p.s. i stil cant visit dananddave forums and cant post there..sigh

yup...had 2 agree too many moves at 1 time....but nice sound effect...sounded kinda lyk a movie trailer.....personally i lyk it very much..

This trailer is unbelievable. I can't believe it! Great job!

hey neo, i think your moves are good no doubt but the fliming's really BAD.

when i was doing black backdrop stuff, i tot we had to darken the things and all too, turned out that if you had good lighting (preferably bright warm orange light), the moves would be really clear and stuff can be seen.

cobra cut starting.. king cobra ending... familiar? :P

not implying anything :ph43r:

Yeah, the same thing that others have already pointed out.

First, it's too dark to see anything properly. And yeah, too many things happening at the same time, making quite messy and confusing. Blah blah, I'm repeating what others have said. :P

But hey, good try for your debut video already. ;)

You and ling's avatar look smilar huh. <_<

hmmm.... something going on ??? :lol: :lol: :lol: :P :P :P

rubbish!
its [Ling] and..... *l***nt.
haha. ;)

who is *l***nt ?!?! ^_^
clues ?

lol OFFTOPIC la peeps.

anyway my sig keep changing so its lidat. and yes the flipback fan is hers.. i just took it cos it looks nice =)


um yea jeremy. reloaded was a very big inspiration on me =)))

oh yes i fergot to include bone in the credits.. sorry! =/

then you should not have made the background for the cobra cut so black so that everyone can see the black cloth hanging there...!

:P

thanks for the compliment. I cant add anymore to what others have said here, but you had an interesting choice of soundtrack.

Hey neo,

Great video man, i really enjoyed it. Yeah just a lil too dark, but probably you wanted that effect rite, but rmb we want to see the moves too! Yeap. The flipback vanish was good but the birdy fan needs some work (as in the fan, yeah). Just a lil confusing with the multiple moves going on. i had to rewind to view every single frame. haha! :D But it's not bad an attempt considering its ur first. and oh ya, i like the soundtrack too. :)

D.

Hey Neo,

I'm not a flourisher myself, but I wanna say congratulations. Considering that this is your first video, it's pretty good. Here are a few flaws. As everyone already mentioned, it's too dark. Another thing, when the video starts I was enticipating more but before I see more, it ended abruptly. So it would be a good idea if you do them one by one from easier to more difficult. It can build up suspense too. I like your background music. Keep it up!

Ben B)