It's a Card Vanish. ez link card though. :)

Any comment is welcomed.


http://s6.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0XMVIR8RQ56112T5V6M1I0L9UT

nice. at least that's what i tink, cause i'm still a freakin noob.

the second vanish looks more suspicious than the others.

overall,not bad at all :)

execution of sleight: good
knowledge of angles: good
effect pacing: good
stength of effect; good
flow of effect: to be improved
"smoothness"/elegance/naturalness: to be improved
entertainment value: good, but should play up the impact

overall: 5.8/10 (or slighly better than average)

hope u roughly understand what i mean by each point. need elab, just ask.

Good points
execution of sleight: good
knowledge of angles: good

Bad Points
Too stiff
need to be more smooth in the movement


Overall Result : 6/10 above average..

Thanks for the comment!

If possible please elaborate more. :)

Thanks for the comment too. I understand what you meant, except how I play up the impact?

Thanks! advice noted.

Originality: 6.5
Presentation: 6.5
Wow factor: 6
Technique: 7
Overall: 6.5

if u could do it faster and a bit smoother it would be good!

give a slightly longer pause between each effect so people can digest what has happened and know that it really vanished/reappear before u move on to the next.

it might also work if u do this as a rapid fire series of vanish and reappearance.

"When struggling with a trick that doesn't seem to go over, try speeding it up or slowing it down, see if the change in tempo doesn't make it more effective." - Al Goshman

so try both and see which works out better. this way, partly through pacing, u can play up the impact.

Well actually I feel this video was fantastic. Yeah, you didn't flash and I thought your moves were kinda graceful. There's always room for improvement of course but I seriously think this was a good first video.

I'd give this video a 8.5.

i'm a noob...i also don know tis trick...but hope u don mind mi saying this...u were a litlle stiff...so it seem that u are hiding something...so...just my opnion

I think it looks pretty good to me. Maybe you should'nt repeat too many of the vanish with the same sleight.

Thanks for the rating!

been practicing a lot. my hands are getting smoother. Just that I couldn't get the right angle and position to perform in real life, just as I tought, it's not possible to use mirror and camera to measure.

Thank you, that perfectly explains it. Now left the hands on part for me. :)

Thanks for the generous rating! I'll make sure I live up to it. :D

First of all, good or bad, all comments are welcomed! The more I watch the video, the more I find my movements rather stiff too. By the way, I am hiding something...! :lol:

As you can see, there's a total of 3 sequence. In my opinion, it should be just nice. I would love to mix other vanish sleights into it if I can manage to aquire more of it. Thanks!

You should tell that to Oz Pearlman...

After all, this is his routine from his video "Stealing Pips".

hmm.. joined too late.. didn't get a chance to view it. if possible, is there any chance for you to repost? :P